You seem to be doing even more patterning than usual! Conceptually I like the shark piece. Doing something like adding more diagonals could really push the sensation of danger - what if the water was a diagonal horizon line? Nice work :) Also, I really like the face on the woman in the second spread. It's nicely refined, in the past you've drawn faces a little more severely, no?
:) thanks for the critique! One of my goals this summer is to work on how I draw my people, so you'll probably see alot more sketches dealing with human characters. I welcome any input :)
You seem to be doing even more patterning than usual! Conceptually I like the shark piece. Doing something like adding more diagonals could really push the sensation of danger - what if the water was a diagonal horizon line? Nice work :) Also, I really like the face on the woman in the second spread. It's nicely refined, in the past you've drawn faces a little more severely, no?
ReplyDelete:) thanks for the critique! One of my goals this summer is to work on how I draw my people, so you'll probably see alot more sketches dealing with human characters. I welcome any input :)
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